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复习指导:同等学历写作技巧及评分标准(5)

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3.依据比较和对比法进行论述

  一般地说,比较是指对事物的相同方面进行比较;对比是指对比事物的差异或不同方面。下面两段就采用了对比方法。这两段将口头英语与书面英语的不同方面作了比较,两段的观点都一一对应,比如:oral english is imformal while written english is comparatively formal就是一对观点的对比。另外,两段之间用unlike oral englsh承接,既让段落过渡自然,又使对比强烈。
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  first of all,oral english is usually considered informal.so no matter how poor one s language is and how strange and foreign one s pronunciation is,it seems insignificant if only one can make his audience understood.secondly,as to the audience,they are only interested in grasping the meaning,not actually mind,or even hardly notice how many grammatical mistakes the speaker makes.furthermore,oral english is also regarded adaptable.when we cannot express something precisely,we may give the explanation of it instead,or correct the mistakes on the spot.so oral english gives less chances of misunderstanding.   

unlike oral english,written english is comparatively formal.it requires good spelling and perfect grammar.poor spelling and too many grammatical mistakes will put readers in a puzzling difficulty.they would be confused about what writers are getting at.in addition,once the words are printed on the paper and handed to whoever the person concerned,writers can no longer make any changes.to avoid this,one has to pay much attention to spelling,practise grammer and write clearly-constructed paragraphs.as a result it will take longer time and much more efforts to communicate in written english than in oral english. 

  4.依据时 间的先后进行论述来源:www.gzu521.com

  依据时 间的先后次序展开段落,就是完全按照事物实际发展的时 间先后进行论述。如:下面两段就是以时 间为序介绍鹿的生长过程。随着夏季一天天过去,又随着秋去冬来,鹿的新陈代谢也随着季节的推移而变化。

  as the summer progresses and the fawns grow,they become less dependent on their mother s milk and more dependent on growing plants as food sources.the adult males spend the summer growing antlers and getting fat.both males and females continue to eat high quality food in the fall insgroupsto deposit body fat for the winter.in the case of does and fawns,a great deal of energy is expended either in milk production or in growing,and fat is not accumulated as quickly as it is in full grown males.fat reserves are like bank accounts to be drawn on in the winter when food supplies are limited and sometimes difficult to reach because of deep snow. as fall turnssintoswinter,other changes take place.fawns lose their spotted coat.hair on all the deer becomes darker and thicker.the change in the hair coats is usually complete by september and maximum hair depths are reached by november or december when winter becomes cold. 

  5.依据空间顺序展开段落 来源:www.gzu521.com

  依据空间的次序进行论述应是有序地由远至近或由近至远,由上至下或由下至上对事物进行描写。下面的例子描写了一幅美丽宁静的夜景。作者先描写空中的月亮,再随洒向大地的月光写到湖四周随风摇曳的树枝,又由青蛙的叫声把读者引到了湖的中央,最后结尾讲:这是一个多么迷人的夜晚。这个段落文字简洁流畅,有序地按空间顺序由上写到下,由外写到里。读者可在平时的练习中注意模仿。

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